• Query Letter for The Prince’s Secret

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      14th Feb 10
      Kim

    This is my pitch for my novel:


    Only one person knows eighteen-year-old Prince Conell De Caprise’s horrible secret and he’s determined to use it to defeat the young prince in order to regain control over the Land of Ezasu.


    One the day before his execution, Prince Conell de Caprise escapes from the Regent-Queen’s prison taking with him his two close friends and a strange ill girl who claims a medallion brought her to his world. He soon discovers that the demon, sent by the queen to capture them, knows of the horrible secret Conell has kept hidden from his friends for ten years. A sin that led to the death of his and their families.


    Yet Conell’s royal blood demands he protects the girl, which forces the demon to use the young man’s past to crush him. The demon knows if he can capture the girl and control her mystic trinket, then he can annihilate Ezasu’ God and seize what once belonged to him: Ezasu and her people. As hard as he tries, Conell can no longer run from his hidden sin and must confront the demon in order to save the young ill girl and rescue a people he abandoned years ago.


    HIDDEN SECRETS is an epic stand alone fantasy, the first book in a three-book series. It is a completed at 72,000 words and is targeted for older teens, aged 16 and up.

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