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		<title>Comment on How to Write Sword Fighting Scenes by Kim</title>
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		<dc:creator>Kim</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 05 Feb 2012 00:27:43 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Wow, Mouse, that&#039;s really good.  Good job!!  I like it.  :)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Wow, Mouse, that&#8217;s really good.  Good job!!  I like it.  <img src='http://kimkouski.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
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		<title>Comment on How to Write Sword Fighting Scenes by Mouse</title>
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		<dc:creator>Mouse</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 04 Feb 2012 22:06:14 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Names replaced with MC and BG (for Bad Guy - creative, right?)

MC tried wildly to think of something he’d learned from reading fights and watching the fencing team. Fencing was too fast-paced for a non-fencer to make sense of the movements. Okay, that didn’t help. You were supposed to have trained for years – too late for that; you should always have the better weapon – that was out too; using the environment is always helpful – hmm...
He jumped over a dead body, backing away and hoping she would follow.
She did.
She must not have seen what he had done. As he’d jumped over, he’d kicked the arm out a little further in the hopes that the sword in the corpse’s hand would catch her, or at least give her a scrape worthy of a band-aid. One foot was over. The second one lifted, higher, and... caught!
With a loud shriek, BG tumbled to the ground. He wanted to dance. She’d tripped! She’d tripped just like he’d planned!
Then he remembered that she still had both her axes.
Her titian hair had spilled out of its bun and was now in long cascades over her shoulders as she stood again. A red, wet gash ran from her left hip slightly up and all the way across her torso. BG dropped the axe in her right hand and staggered forward, gripping his shoulder to steady herself. He shut his eyes and stabbed forward blindly with the knife.
Words that made him wince tore out of her perfectly painted mouth. Then with her left hand, BG brought down the axe she still gripped.
He screamed as the flesh of his right arm was ripped off, straight down to the bone. Crimson spray exploded from his arm, and pain seared through his entire body as if he was being thrown through a shredding machine.
BG collapsed to the ground in a fit of violent writhing, reaching desperately for the axe her left hand had dropped after slicing him up like salami, the knife embedded in the lowest part of her sternum. Had he been able to think clearly, he would have congratulated himself on actually making contact with her. As he was a bit preoccupied with staring at the bits of his own skin and muscle lying on the ground surrounded by frayed fragments of blood vessels and a pool of thick red blood that could only be his own, however, he failed to notice this small victory and instead commenced panicky screaming in pain.

That&#039;s the actual battle scene; one of the Ant&#039;s henchmen sees the injury and panics, thus distracting her long enough for the poor guy to run away...
Acting it out was very helpful - as well as painful; my opponent enjoyed whacking at my fingers :S
Thank you very much again!

-Mouse</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Names replaced with MC and BG (for Bad Guy &#8211; creative, right?)</p>
<p>MC tried wildly to think of something he’d learned from reading fights and watching the fencing team. Fencing was too fast-paced for a non-fencer to make sense of the movements. Okay, that didn’t help. You were supposed to have trained for years – too late for that; you should always have the better weapon – that was out too; using the environment is always helpful – hmm&#8230;<br />
He jumped over a dead body, backing away and hoping she would follow.<br />
She did.<br />
She must not have seen what he had done. As he’d jumped over, he’d kicked the arm out a little further in the hopes that the sword in the corpse’s hand would catch her, or at least give her a scrape worthy of a band-aid. One foot was over. The second one lifted, higher, and&#8230; caught!<br />
With a loud shriek, BG tumbled to the ground. He wanted to dance. She’d tripped! She’d tripped just like he’d planned!<br />
Then he remembered that she still had both her axes.<br />
Her titian hair had spilled out of its bun and was now in long cascades over her shoulders as she stood again. A red, wet gash ran from her left hip slightly up and all the way across her torso. BG dropped the axe in her right hand and staggered forward, gripping his shoulder to steady herself. He shut his eyes and stabbed forward blindly with the knife.<br />
Words that made him wince tore out of her perfectly painted mouth. Then with her left hand, BG brought down the axe she still gripped.<br />
He screamed as the flesh of his right arm was ripped off, straight down to the bone. Crimson spray exploded from his arm, and pain seared through his entire body as if he was being thrown through a shredding machine.<br />
BG collapsed to the ground in a fit of violent writhing, reaching desperately for the axe her left hand had dropped after slicing him up like salami, the knife embedded in the lowest part of her sternum. Had he been able to think clearly, he would have congratulated himself on actually making contact with her. As he was a bit preoccupied with staring at the bits of his own skin and muscle lying on the ground surrounded by frayed fragments of blood vessels and a pool of thick red blood that could only be his own, however, he failed to notice this small victory and instead commenced panicky screaming in pain.</p>
<p>That&#8217;s the actual battle scene; one of the Ant&#8217;s henchmen sees the injury and panics, thus distracting her long enough for the poor guy to run away&#8230;<br />
Acting it out was very helpful &#8211; as well as painful; my opponent enjoyed whacking at my fingers :S<br />
Thank you very much again!</p>
<p>-Mouse</p>
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		<title>Comment on How to Write Sword Fighting Scenes by Kim</title>
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		<dc:creator>Kim</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 04 Feb 2012 01:22:16 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Not a problem.  Have fun.  And I&#039;d love to see what you come up with.  Also check out the second Lord of the Rings show.  There&#039;s a great fight scene in there, you might get some ideas for that too.  :)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Not a problem.  Have fun.  And I&#8217;d love to see what you come up with.  Also check out the second Lord of the Rings show.  There&#8217;s a great fight scene in there, you might get some ideas for that too.  <img src='http://kimkouski.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
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		<title>Comment on How to Write Sword Fighting Scenes by Mouse</title>
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		<dc:creator>Mouse</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 03 Feb 2012 00:57:43 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I like the idea of acting it out - as it&#039;s outside in the middle of another, larger battle I couldn&#039;t work in the other ideas in this scene, but they were excellent! Thank you very much; when I complete the scene I&#039;ll have to post it for you. Thanks much again! :)
-Mouse</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I like the idea of acting it out &#8211; as it&#8217;s outside in the middle of another, larger battle I couldn&#8217;t work in the other ideas in this scene, but they were excellent! Thank you very much; when I complete the scene I&#8217;ll have to post it for you. Thanks much again! <img src='http://kimkouski.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' /><br />
-Mouse</p>
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		<title>Comment on How to Write Sword Fighting Scenes by Kim</title>
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		<dc:creator>Kim</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 02 Feb 2012 00:34:00 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Wow!! mmmm . . . I would say try to distract him, then run like mad. :)))   Or as Darren has always said, everything is weapon.  Is there a chair around?  The MC can use it like the lion tamer does, to push the Antagonist back and make his way to the door.  What about a fire poker?  Those are heavy and can be used the same as a sword or even a pike.  Ever been on a spiral staircase?  Know why they are spiral?  Ever try to fight on one?  The person going up has the upper hand, while the guy below is in a bad situation.  Is there a glass of beer nearby?  the MC can toss it in the Ant&#039;s face, distracting him.  swinging two axes can make the Ant unstable, so maybe then the MC tosses the beer in the Ant&#039;s face allowing him to escape.  

I suggest you grab some nerf swords and axes and play out the scene with a friend.  See what you can come up with.  Have the friend be the Ant with two &#039;axes&#039; and you have a small &#039;knife&#039;.  What do your instincts say?  What do you want to do?  How can you get out of it?  You&#039;d be surprised what you can come up with.  Of course the MC doesn&#039;t have this kind of luxery and you&#039;ll have to make sure it&#039;s not &#039;controlled&#039;.  But I&#039;m sure you could come up with something cool.  :)  Let me know what you come up with and post it if you want.  :)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Wow!! mmmm . . . I would say try to distract him, then run like mad. <img src='http://kimkouski.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' /> ))   Or as Darren has always said, everything is weapon.  Is there a chair around?  The MC can use it like the lion tamer does, to push the Antagonist back and make his way to the door.  What about a fire poker?  Those are heavy and can be used the same as a sword or even a pike.  Ever been on a spiral staircase?  Know why they are spiral?  Ever try to fight on one?  The person going up has the upper hand, while the guy below is in a bad situation.  Is there a glass of beer nearby?  the MC can toss it in the Ant&#8217;s face, distracting him.  swinging two axes can make the Ant unstable, so maybe then the MC tosses the beer in the Ant&#8217;s face allowing him to escape.  </p>
<p>I suggest you grab some nerf swords and axes and play out the scene with a friend.  See what you can come up with.  Have the friend be the Ant with two &#8216;axes&#8217; and you have a small &#8216;knife&#8217;.  What do your instincts say?  What do you want to do?  How can you get out of it?  You&#8217;d be surprised what you can come up with.  Of course the MC doesn&#8217;t have this kind of luxery and you&#8217;ll have to make sure it&#8217;s not &#8216;controlled&#8217;.  But I&#8217;m sure you could come up with something cool.  <img src='http://kimkouski.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' />   Let me know what you come up with and post it if you want.  <img src='http://kimkouski.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
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		<title>Comment on How to Write Sword Fighting Scenes by Mouse</title>
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		<dc:creator>Mouse</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 01 Feb 2012 01:38:11 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>This was very interesting and helpful; thank you for sharing. I do have one question however - how would a totally inexperienced character who doesn&#039;t have a clue how to even hold the sword go about defeating an obviously skilled antagonist who is merely toying with him? Currently I have the poor guy getting his opponent to trip while he tries to figure something out. He&#039;s already lost two blades and is down to a knife. The opponent is wielding two axes. Thanks much!
-Mouse</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>This was very interesting and helpful; thank you for sharing. I do have one question however &#8211; how would a totally inexperienced character who doesn&#8217;t have a clue how to even hold the sword go about defeating an obviously skilled antagonist who is merely toying with him? Currently I have the poor guy getting his opponent to trip while he tries to figure something out. He&#8217;s already lost two blades and is down to a knife. The opponent is wielding two axes. Thanks much!<br />
-Mouse</p>
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		<title>Comment on In Search of Sir Robert Lawrence of Ashton Hall Circa 1190 AD by Kim</title>
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		<dc:creator>Kim</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 27 Jan 2012 04:33:38 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Welcome to the family, Bea!!! I&#039;m so glad you like the article.  Now hopefully we can lay this whole thing about poor Grandpa Lawrence to rest.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Welcome to the family, Bea!!! I&#8217;m so glad you like the article.  Now hopefully we can lay this whole thing about poor Grandpa Lawrence to rest.</p>
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		<title>Comment on In Search of Sir Robert Lawrence of Ashton Hall Circa 1190 AD by Bea</title>
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		<dc:creator>Bea</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 16 Jan 2012 17:40:52 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I stumbled across your website after a moment of desperation when I plugged in Anne Wallance&#039;s name in google. I felt your frustration and pain, I had been running into the same sorts of problems. My tree divides from James 1428-1490 and follows his brother Thomas, 1420-1471 and down through the Judah Monis Lawrence, Stark, Marvn, Baker, Schroyer and Krieger line. 
Thank you so much for doing the research of our so many greats grandfathers. It&#039;s an interesting part of our history. 
B. Neal</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I stumbled across your website after a moment of desperation when I plugged in Anne Wallance&#8217;s name in google. I felt your frustration and pain, I had been running into the same sorts of problems. My tree divides from James 1428-1490 and follows his brother Thomas, 1420-1471 and down through the Judah Monis Lawrence, Stark, Marvn, Baker, Schroyer and Krieger line.<br />
Thank you so much for doing the research of our so many greats grandfathers. It&#8217;s an interesting part of our history.<br />
B. Neal</p>
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		<title>Comment on In Search of Sir Robert Lawrence of Ashton Hall Circa 1190 AD by Kim</title>
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		<dc:creator>Kim</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 30 Nov 2011 01:16:48 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Awesome, Roland!! I&#039;m always so surprised at how many folks came from this one man.  Glad you liked it.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Awesome, Roland!! I&#8217;m always so surprised at how many folks came from this one man.  Glad you liked it.</p>
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		<title>Comment on In Search of Sir Robert Lawrence of Ashton Hall Circa 1190 AD by Roland Giguere</title>
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		<dc:creator>Roland Giguere</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 18 Nov 2011 20:27:27 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Great work!  I have been researching my granddaughter&#039;s ancestors.  Her lineage diverges from yours at #9. Robert Lawrence and Amphilbis Lonford.  She descended from their son Nicholas.  I will share this story with her grandmother Lawrence.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Great work!  I have been researching my granddaughter&#8217;s ancestors.  Her lineage diverges from yours at #9. Robert Lawrence and Amphilbis Lonford.  She descended from their son Nicholas.  I will share this story with her grandmother Lawrence.</p>
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